Clarence’s father is dying from some unknown illness. A Reaper comes by every day to see if he’s ready to travel the long road to Ganedyn, which I’m assuming is paradise. Many who travel the road don’t need it. While his mother’s willing to sacrifice years from her life, she doesn’t want the kids, Clarence and Jessi, doing the same. Desperate they resort to different tactics. Jessi sneaks next door and steals a bird from the Neighbor’s garden. That buys a little time. Clarence goes to speak to the neighbor and gets sent on a quest to dislodge the Reaper in the Tree, who’s presence there is pretty much the source of the problem.
Additional Comments:
World-building (3/5) – A lot of imagination went into creating this bleak, colorless world. Much of the lore is explained fairly naturally, but the worlds don’t make much sense. There’s a normal, mortal world, a paradise, and The End. Part of what bothered me is the naming system or lack thereof. The Neighbor, the Red Reaper, The Reaper in the Tree, etc. I wish they had real names instead of titles. Caggers (sorry about spelling) are fears from one of the worlds creeping into the mortal realm.
Characters (3.5/5) – Clarence, Wakoba, and Jessi are stereotypical questing kids. Clarence is the one given the quest. Jessi’s his sister, the brave one who carries a bat around. Wakoba’s the timid friend who has to face his fears to fulfill his part of the quest.
Plot (3/5) – It follows a logical path, but I don’t get a good sense of the world space or time passing. Part of that might be that time in the dark place they travel to (forest?) and nearing the Pit gets skewed. The characters go from one conversation to another talking about what’s happening with little actually happening until the final confrontation.
It’s 100% kid-friendly.
Disclaimer – it’s probably more literature-based fantasy than I’m used to. There are probably deep roots of moral lessons in here about taking care of the Earth/world you have, one person making all the difference, and the power of kids. Guess I just look for more direct, sword or bow-wielding action in my fantasy. There are plenty of scythes about because of the Reapers, but there are too many restrictions on them to make for a good old-fashioned fight. (Can’t kill a reaper with his own weapon.)
Conclusion:
Fans of RK Gold will probably enjoy this tale. Those who gravitate to Middle Grade literature too might find lots to love within. It reminds me of Treasure: Seed Savers by S. Smith. They’re both books about a world on the brink of collapse due to mismanagement of resources.
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Keira finds a magic hat that gives her access to knowledge she might not have otherwise. She forms a detective agency with her grandfather (whom she calls Papa). They’re called upon to discover who stole the crown jewels of England.
Additional Comments:
I heard the audioversion, so some of my spellings might be a tad off.
Narration 4/5: Very nice. It’s nice to have the male/female parts largely divided between the two narrators. The mother sounded a tad too formal, but Keira’s voice was excellent as were most of the British characters.
Characters 3/5: Keira and Papa and Commish are fine characters. They’re a tad stock but in a tale of this size and breadth, that’s fitting. You want your girl detective to be super smart and always wind up on top. That’s part of the charm of girl detective stories. I know Waffles is supposed to be comic relief, but he’s usually just a nuisance. (Question the validity of such a genre? Nancy Drew’s survived quite a few decades as an ace detective.)
Plot 2.5/5: Nonsensical at best. I get this is a kid’s book, but that doesn’t mean it should lack all sense. The crown jewels get stolen and they turn to a kid with a magic hat for the answers? They seem overly concerned with finding footprints at the crime scene.
World-building 2.5/5: The magic hat’s powers aren’t really well-defined. Sometimes, it seems all powerful, in which case they should have just asked it “hey, who stole the jewels and how do we catch them?” At other times, it gets broken then repaired with duct tape. Magic in a kid’s story is fine, but there should still be an established system of why it works the way it does. Spy and detective are used pretty much interchangeably here, which is annoying because they’re way different jobs. Keira and her grandfather form a detective agency, but she repeatedly refers to what they do as spying, which simply isn’t true. It’s an investigation. The doll angle is kind of cool.
Conclusion:
If you’re very good at suspending disbelief and just looking for some mindless kid charm, this is a decent choice. It’s very well-presented, even if the story is somewhat lacking in sense.
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3/5 stars Interesting Twist on Boy Learns he has Cool Gifts
Summary:
Sam’s dead (not a spoiler, that’s in the blurb). He goes to a place called Havona to learn the secrets of the universe. You’ll have to forgive my lack of details. I’m partly trying to avoid spoilers and it’s been a while since I heard the audiobook. I meant to write this ages ago.
Additional Comments:
– Worldbuilding (3.5/5) – This book contains a lot of really cool ideas. They’re pretty hard to describe though, and the author does an admirable job of attempting the feat. For example, the switching bodies section was very cool.
– Characters (3.5/5) – Sam meets several aliens. Only about 4 of them remain central to the story. Can’t remember the names right now, and besides, my spelling of them would be atrocious anyway. I don’t feel like you really get to know the pre-death Sam well enough to like him as a character. I did like his friend, but our time with her is short too. That may be purposeful.
– Plot (3/5) – The book splits roughly 1/5 to 4/5 before death and after death. The after death sections play out like most “training” sequences with the added bonus of very neat new worlds being thrown in the mix.
– Closure (1/5) – Clearly, this book is meant to be a series. I have a thing about closure, as in I REALLY like it and this book severely lacked it. That said, there are definitely good parts to the book. The end fails to satisfy. It’s not quite a true cliffhanger, but the end sprang up and ran right to the edge of … something, a gentle slide into “well, there’s definitely more to come.” Please note, this might just be a personal taste thing. I absolutely hate endings that feel like teasers/ setup for a new book.
– Why couldn’t I connect with the book?
After some soul-searching, I’m ready to conclude “not my cup of tea.” It’s a decent book. One of my major pitfalls in buying into the story was a lack of a real sense of danger. They’re already dead. The sense of “oh, wow, this could truly be the END” never really kicked in throughout the story, even with the threat of “Reset”. That removed a lot of the tension for me. Without tension, I couldn’t get into the conflict. Without conflict, there’s not much of a story.
– Aside: Much of this story, probably right down to starting with the cover, felt stylistically like the “new” Willy Wonka movie with Johnny Depp or the Oz, the Great and Powerful. They’re over-the-top, crazy colors everywhere kind of movies.
– Who do I think would like the book?
Middle grade boys, an underserved market if there is such a thing in literature. This is not a knock against them in anyway. It’s an acknowledgement that their tastes and mine will differ.
– Narration (2.5/5) – Usually, I’m cool with narrators. This one is okay, but his voice isn’t my favorite. He has a very matter-of-fact style of reading that made parts come across as choppy.
Conclusion:
The plot feels like the beginning act of a much larger play. If that sort of thing bothers you, avoid. If you’re cool with that, go for it. What it lacks in closure, it makes up for in imagination and neat concepts. Sam’s a likable guy. Give the audio sample a shot and see if you like it. Or read a few pages from the preview and take the leap if you like what you see.
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Hey all, tonight we have a very special guest. He’s the narrator of many great books, including Spirit’s Bane and The Golden City Captives. (both ebooks are free.) By the way, if you have the ebook, usually the audiobooks are cheaper. If you’ve never listened to one of his audiobooks, you should definitely consider doing so.
Feel free to join the discussion by commenting.
Let’s Welcome Reuben.
BL: Glad you are able to join us, Reuben!
Reuben: Thanks, Bonnie.
BL: I am learning a lot about the Audiobook process – it is fascinating!
EF: Hey Reuben, welcome – this is a great place to hang out.
Reuben: I love it so far!
Reuben Corbett Discussion #1
Hey, thanks for joining us today.
Tell us about yourself. Where are you from? What got you into narrating?
Do you listen to audiobooks?
How can we learn more about you? (links)
Do you have a FB page?
Reuben: Well, I am from Grand Junction, Colorado. I was a welder for a number of years, worked in all kinds of trades. I have always loved reading books, and I was always told I had a good voice! So I decided to get into narrating. I was a cello performance major in college, so I was already familiar with audio recording. So I got out my old equipment and started reading!
Me: Do you still play the cello?
Reuben: I do, but not nearly as much as I would like, with work an all. I definitely need to get back into it!
EF: Reuben, what was your first audition like?
Reuben: First audition for an audiobook? It was terrible, lol. It took me almost 6 months of practicing, auditioning, and recording to really find my voice, my style. I also learned a lot about recording audiobooks! Very different from recording music, acoustic treatment of the room is critical to great sounding recordings.
EF: Do you have a home studio or is there somewhere that you go?
Reuben: Lol, you’re not going to believe this, but my studio is actually in my parents basement! My house is next to a very noisy road, and it didn’t matter how much I did to treat my closet, car noises showed up in the recordings.
Reuben Corbett Discussion #2
How many books have you narrated?
Readers: What have you been reading lately?
Reuben: I have narrated 7 books so far. Right now I am working on the Dragonia Series for Craig A. Price Jr.
Me: I have the first of that series on my to-read list.
EF: I’ve been working on a project for the day job- so I lot of business and leadership books. Way behind on the fun books.
BL: Sadly, I haven’t made enough time to do as much reading as I would like – I am just started the 7th in Toby Neal’s Crime in Paradise
Me: I have all but given up “fun” reading. Usually too much else to do, but I enjoy the whole process … even rewriting, which I’ll be doing a LOT of this summer.
BL: Hope you get a lot of fun reading time! I got away from it for a little while and really missed it – it rejuvenates me when I am spending too much time in my own thoughts
Reuben Corbett Discussion #3
What do you look for when you browse for things to audition for?
Readers: What do you look for in a book?
Reuben: I look for a book that I would want to read lol. I love science fiction and fantasy. I also love self help books lol.
Me: Self-help and scifi/fantasy…that’s an interesting mix. Do you get a lot of fun reading time?
Reuben: I do, I really do. I just love immersing myself in stories. I also love to find ways to better myself, hence the self help books.
Me: What’s one piece of advice you’ve gotten from a self-help book recently?
Reuben: Fear is: False Evidence Appearing Real
Reuben Corbett Discussion #4
Tell us a little about what you’ve been working on recently.
Readers: tell us something you’ve been working on recently.
Reuben: I just finished Craig’s first installment in the Dragonia Empire series. It is very much in the epic fantasy genre. I just started the second book, where the story really gets going!
Me: Tell us a little about that series.
Reuben: It is very much rebellion against empire. Two main characters, Devarius and Paedyn, lead a ragtag bunch of villagers on a perilous quest to join the resistance. There are dragons, betrayal, and romance!
Reuben Corbett Discussion #5
If you could recommend 3 of the books you’ve narrated, what would they be and why?
Readers: Do you listen to audiobooks? What could convince you to try audio if you haven’t ever done so?
Reuben: I would definitely recommend The Afterlife Academy, Spirit’s Bane, and Dragonia: Rise of the Wyverns. Afterlife Academy because it is a pretty silly paranormal book that kids and adults can enjoy. It has fun characters, and great humor. Spirit’s Bane because it is very thought provoking, deeply emotional and spiritual, but also fantastically fun fiction drama. It has action and really great characters that were a blast to do voices for. I’ve already talked a little about Dragonia…
Me: Okay, so, of course I’m gonna focus on SB for a moment… who was your favorite character to voice?
Reuben: Oh my goodness… This book definitely tested the limits of my acting abilities, lots of character voices. I have to say that the most fun voice was the guilt demon! Satan was difficult, as you can imagine. Suave, yet the epitome of evil…lol tough. I also loved doing the voice of Lord Hadeon.
Me: I think the one that impressed me the most was Mina… the one that flat-out made me laugh was the “frantic little demon.”
BL: I have to admit I have only tried one audiobook – and I was not enamored with the story – I am definitely going to give it another try (but with one of Julie’s books!) now that I have started taking walks daily.
Reuben Corbett Discussion #6
What inspires you?
Readers: What inspires you?
Reuben: My inspiration, to be honest, comes from other narrators. I love hearing how other people read, do voices, tone, etc.
Reuben Corbett Discussion #7
What is your process for creating an audiobook?
Readers: Describe one of your creative processes. What do you do? How do you do it?
EF: When I am editing a big project, I tend to cut it into smaller pieces and arrange it on my living room wall. A friend saw it once and asked if I was stalking someone.
Me: That’s awesome. I want a pic of that!
Reuben: First, I have to read the book! As I am reading, I can hear the tone of the book, from the way the author writes. Ideas for voices also form as I get to know the characters, where they are from, etc.
Reuben Corbett Discussion #8
Thanks for stopping by tonight. Stick around for a few days as some people couldn’t make it tonight but may drop in later tonight or tomorrow.
Totally not kicking you out, but this ends the “formal” stuffs I prepped. 😛
Closing thoughts?
Reuben: Yes, I have some promo codes for The Afterlife Academy if anyone wants a free audiobook!
Me: I heard it. I’ll second that it’s a good one.
Audiobooks Reuben has done …
The Golden City Captives, Spirit’s Bane, The Afterlife Academy, The Night Human Hunter, Simplify, Godstone, and Dragonia: Rise of the Wyverns. Go here if you want to check them out.
Commentary:
He’s an amazing narrator (quick, clean audio, decent range of voices, easy to work with). If you’re interested in hiring him, look him up on ACX or email me your contact info and I will ask him to get back to you. (devyaschildren @ gmail.com)
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A young Rider leaves the comfort of home to track down a dragon hatching snatcher. He vows to bring justice, but is that the only way?
Additional Comments:
– It’s been long enough since I heard the first book that I had to spend the first bit orienting myself with the world again.
– Since I heard the audiobook, I was totally picturing Brayden, not Braidyn, but that’s cool.
– The little dragon baby (Perci? Sorry about spelling) was adorable, even if she is still inside the egg.
– Plot (4/5): Things progress logically. We get to meet Braidyn and get a brief feel for his sense of justice and fairness. Then, after the eggs go missing, he sets out on the larger quest to bring them back.
– Characters (3.5/5): Several characters’ motives didn’t seem as strong as they could be. I get that the guy who stole the egg was disgruntled, but that whole thing could have gone down without the middleman so to speak. The returning characters act as support for the young main character.
– World-building (4/5): The introduction to a new culture provided a nice touch. The Riders from the South don’t do much to adapt, but they do foster a decent relationship with the new people.
– Although several well-described fights happen, there’s not much danger sense throughout. That might be due to trying to keep it MG friendly.
Conclusion:
Kid-safe dragon adventure story.
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*This is a guest post put together by Christina Amy Guglielmon.
Remember the excitement of listening to a new vinyl or CD album, listening to every track in order, feeling and sensing the flow of one song to the next, and–if you particularly were into CDs–flipping through that music packet to pour over the lyrics and get as much as you can out of just 10 songs? Ha, well I remember this, and maybe you do, too. For me at least, there seems to be something magical that happens when I clear away distractions around me and concentrate solely on the music–its melody, rhythm, lyrics, flow….all of it!
Music is Awesome:
Music is an experience like no other, engaging our imaginations, intellect, feelings and emotions, and even something deeper inside of us. We may call it our souls or our spirits. Whatever it is, we know it’s real and that music activates it.
Ha, maybe I’m the only one who gets this sentimental over music, but I bet there’s at least a few of you who feel that way, too. If that’s you, then this playlist is truly for you, for those of us who often need music to understand life, to understand our stories as well as other people’s stories–both true and fictional.
Come Join My Process:
This music playlist is my way of processing and exploring Julie’s story, Reclaim the Darklands.
I invite you into this listening process! Every song is chosen for a reason, and track order is also chosen with intention. Both Julie and I dialogued about the playlist, so she was a part of the process as well!
(Me – Yeah, you should see the size of the list of songs that didn’t make the list. It was a fun process to go through.)
Everyone comes away from listening to music experiencing something a bit different, and that’s OK and beautiful! We are all different people with different tastes in music. Some of these songs will connect with you, others won’t, and some may take several re-listens to catch the meaning. Don’t feel the need to rush the process–enjoy the music and let it take you on a journey!
Some of the songs I imagined as musical themes for characters, others as score pieces for different scenes in the book or overall themes, and still other songs as linked to certain chapters in the book. A lot of these songs can apply to more than one situation in the book, and maybe you would place the song in a different part of the story or link it up with a different character than I did. Your interpretation of the music and story may differ from mine, and that’s awesome! This is my process! What’s yours? (Feel free to comment below.)
What follows is some of my thoughts on each piece of music as it pertains to the story. Consider this as the CD album packet containing the lyrics. The difference here is that I’m discussing my thoughts on each song and full lyrics won’t be given, but do look them up if you’re interested! You can use this as a resource for the playlist, so scroll through it as you’re listening (or better yet, after you listen!)
This post is part one where the first 13 songs are listed. More parts will follow! Enjoy!
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PLAYLIST TABLE OF CONTENTS PART 1
Playlist Link: RECLAIM THE DARKLANDS PLAYLIST
***Contains spoilers if you have not read Reclaim the Darklands***
(Linked titles are Youtube videos I could find.)
BRIGHT ONES
Chapter 1 of Reclaim the Darklands opens with the Keris Council forming the Order of the Redeemers. The council aims to restore a sense of unity and hope among the people as the Resolute and dark forces seem to be gaining ground. The lyrics in Bright Ones, “We are Your bright ones / Lit up with Your love / Glowing in darkness” reminds me of the Chosen Redeemers, the people the One selected to be bright ones in dark days. And these ones are indeed, “carriers of promise.” The people of Aeris have long awaited the rising of the Chosen Redeemers, and now that these Redeemers are awakened, they are “alive to be a witness.” In context, this type of witness is not passive, but active; it’s a testifying to those promises foretold. Even though the Chosen Redeemers play a role in pushing back the dark forces and bringing healing to the land, every person in Aeris has their place and role. In this chapter, we see a glimpse of that taking place, and so the bridge in this song is truly where I see the strong tie-ins to chapter 1:
“See us rising from a distance
Your light’s burning bright within us
See us rising from a distance
There’s no darkness that could dim this
(You’re lighting us up)”
These are strong declarations of a community choosing to be the light in a world that’s fallen to destruction and ruin, but they aren’t merely choosing to be a light in the generic sense. The Chosen Redeemers specifically know that they gain their strength and gifts from the One. This is the One’s light that is burning within them. That said, the lyric “your light’s burning bright within us” can also refer to a specific Chosen Redeemer (i.e. Katrina) who burns with a fire inside of her.
RIGHT WHERE YOU WANT ME
This is what I imagine one of Vic’s theme to be. By this point in the series, Vic is confident in the One’s ability to protect her from the Outcast. She has learned how to rely on the One and step into dangerous situations with a confidence not only in her identity as a Chosen Redeemer, but also in the One’s power.
The lyric, “There’s a war that’s raging over me / But I know the One who holds the victory” applies to Vic, especially given her name means “victory” (most songs that relate to Vic deal with victory in some way). Vic is a victorious one precisely because she accepts the identity the One gave her and she trusts to the One, who is always protecting her in the midst of the wars raging over her. This whole song is a confident declaration where Vic stands strong in the battles “raging over [her],” knowing that the One is her protection, and because of that “all [her] enemies are paralyzed.”
WATCH YOUR BACK
In chapter 2, we’re reminded that Vic, her friends, and all the people of Aeris are constantly pursued by dark forces, especially the mastermind behind it all–the Dark Man–who indeed masquerades behind many pretenses to lure people into his trap. The people who are not alert to this are easy targets for the Dark Man, and quickly become his prisoners. The people, then, need to stay alert and “watch their backs,” so that they won’t fall prey to the Dark Man and his traps. This phrase “watch your back” is also something we see the Dark Man himself almost telling Vic and her friends as a threat “you better watch your back.”
WARRIOR
For me at least, this song communicates the way Vic & Gwynne are connected in their Chosen Redeemer roles as if they were sisters, and Vic is searching to find Gwynne. I can imagine Gwynne almost speaking to Vic, “You know where to find me” and Vic saying to Gwynne, “I know where to find you.” When Vic is searching for Gwynne, I see her being someone who–if she could send a message to Gwynne–would say to Gwynne in order to comfort Gwynne that soon Vic will find Gwynne, “Oh my darling I am getting closer, hold on tight.” I could see both of them saying to each other, “I could be a warrior, yes I am a warrior / There’s no need to worry, love / Look around it’s glorious / Close your eyes and taste the sun,” but I especially see Vic saying this to Gwynne. Gwynne means “white, light, fair” and so many of the songs that relate to Gwynne concern the light and the sun. I see Gwynne as someone who was born to “taste the sun” and when Vic & Adam get rid of the evil spirit attacking Gwynne, it’s as if Gwynne is able to taste the sun again–she’s set free of that evil spirit. She is a pure one with great wisdom and both her and Vic discover what it means to be “inside the light” throughout their adventures. Although each Chosen Redeemer has a different role, they are all warriors in their own ways.
WHO ARE YOU
By this point in chapter 4, Vic and Adam find Gwynne, but when Vic sees a shadow pass in Gwynne’s eyes, both Vic and Adam know something’s wrong–an evil spirit is oppressing Gwynne. I can see these lyrics coming from the evil spirit directed at both Adam and Vic as they drive this spirit away.
THE RETURN
The beginning 20 seconds of this piece captures–in my opinion–that eerie terror of coming face to face with evil creatures. And then the song morphs into a moment of freedom from those evil creatures. The song builds toward a victory and then becomes sentimental. The very context of this piece is concerning a beautiful moment of friends finding one another after an evil attack. This is what I imagine a score piece might sound like for the scenes in chapter 4 where Vic & Adam fight the evil spirit & it flees, leaving the Chosen Redeemers to finally connect with each one another.
GOLD
After Gwynne is freed from the evil Spirit these lyrics are what I imagine Vic might say to Gwynne. The theme of light relating to Gwynne is carried through in this song as Frida sings, “We will glow / Oh, this is gold.” This also relates to broader themes in the series of stepping into identity: “We will be kings and queens / Don’t be scared, no.”
BLACKOUT
This song begins with a musical sound that is very similar to the music in The Return. As much as possible, I like to link themes and characters with a similar musical sound. This song is one of Gwynne’s themes. The lyrics in Blackout contrast the evil spirit’s attack that just happened. In spite of the evil spirit that tried to come against Gwynne, Gwynne is a light, and “you can’t turn out a light shining from the inside.”
This song begins with the lyrics, “I ride the dawn / It’s in the name I was given / Can’t get away from the meaning / I’ll always rise, I’ll always shine…” and , as said before, Gwynne’s name meaning is “white, light, fair,” so it really is the name given to her. The phrase “In a blackout” is a good way of describing how the evil spirit tried to cloud Gwynne’s vision. What Gwynne experienced was like a blackout, but she is already a confident character who knows her Chosen Redeemer role. She’s confident that “I will illuminate the dark / You won’t escape the beaming.”
But then the lyrics change from I to we, indicating Gwynne is joining up with the Chosen Redeemers and now this whole team of Chosen Redeemers (and even the good people of Aeris) stand up in the battles raging around them and declare, “In a blackout / We will illuminate the dark / They won’t escape the beaming.” It’s a slight nuance, but I think an important one. This is a major theme carried throughout the whole series: everyone needs to work together in order to defeat the dark forces. It’s not Vic alone who is left with the task to reclaim these dark lands and overcome the Dark Man’s evil strategies. Vic has to rely on other people who have their own unique gifts and roles. Everyone has a role and they are all stronger if they work together as a team. So it’s not just I will illuminate the dark, but also we as a collective team will illuminate the dark. We are going to bring light to these dark lands.
LIFTED AWAY
This song can be like a summary of Gwynne being found and freed from the evil spirit. It also speaks of what Gwynne will eventually do for the Dark Man’s prisoners.
Verse 2 can be understood as Vic saying this to Gwynne, but also as Gwynne saying this to all the Dark Man’s prisoners. It is often that when we’ve personally been set free, we set others free: “Give me the rope that is tied around your neck / I’ll cut it away / I’ll set you free as you should be / No longer must we live under these burdens / Your my beloved, my kin, no more a slave” That last line is key for this whole series as the Chosen Redeemers are helping the people of Aeris to see their fight is not against one another–they are all kin. Their real enemy is the Outcast.
PLANETS
This song I imagined as Gwynne’s theme song.
“I say to my body, you were made for living
I say to my mind, you were made for dreaming
You were made, you were made, you were made for this, for this”
Every Chosen Redeemer has had their moment of coming to the realization that they were made for this. Gwynne is already confident in this, but I like to imagine that these opening lyrics would be her sometime before we meet her coming to this realization and confidence that she is a Chosen Redeemer. My interpretation of Gwynne and what stood out to me is that she’s a character who gives deep wisdom that seems so simple, adults might think it too simple to be true. Adults often overlook the deep wisdom a child can give and will call children “dreamers” with their heads in the clouds or just naive, but it often these very people who offer us great wisdom that should be heeded. It would be wise of all of Aeris to listen to Gwynne’s deep wisdom. Dreams take place in the mind and out of the four different Chosen Redeemers, Gwynne is the mind. The theme of being a dreamer will come up later on in relation to Gwynne, but I wanted to establish that in the beginning for Gwynne so that when we come near the end of the playlist, we see that Gwynne has been a confident character from beginning to end. And I think the things she gives away to others were coming from a grounded place of her own identity–maybe that’s just my interpretation.
This song makes multiple references to light. As I said, almost every song pertaining to Gwynne deals with light in some way given her name meaning and who she is as a pure, fair one with great wisdom.
THE HATE INSIDE
In chapter 5, the Resolute’s hatred and prejudice toward the Saroth is on display. Any kind of hatred like this will, indeed, eat all of us alive if we succumb to it. I can see Lady Christa (as well as the Chosen Redeemers, the One, the Lady, and anyone who sides with the One) saying these words to the Resolute, “The hate inside will eat you alive.” In this chapter, Lady Christa says to Lady Callista, “[…] I’ve heard enough hatred for one day. The Saroth are a people like us. There are good and bad people among them. You cannot condemn the whole for the actions of a few.” This is one of the major themes in the whole series. On one end, you have a group of people who are bent toward hatred and prejudice of “the other.” The way these people approach life is to find an enemy in “the other.” But on the other end, you have the Chosen Redeemers and those who stand with them. They see the innate value of every people group–of the Saroth, the Arkonai, and the Bereft–and approach life trying to build a family and community among all of the various people, seeing that their only enemy is the Outcast, but among each other, there is no enemy.
Indulging in hatred toward other people is like willingly choosing to be bound by chains. It’s a slavery in and of itself. The whole Redeemer Chronicles series demonstrates this powerfully and the lyrics of this song also communicate this powerfully, especially the first verse: “The walls of freedom / Come crumbling down / The moment you put those chains / Around you now / Like liquid poison / It takes its toll / Black feathered arrows / That pierce your soul.”
Hatred enslaves the Resolute and pierces their souls. Thankfully, though, one particular Chosen Redeemer is especially gifted at restoring souls.
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My interpretation of this is that this song relates to the Saroth/Arkonai divisions, especially seen in chapters 5 & 8. In chapter 8, we see that Galeric spreads lies concerning the Saroth in order to enslave them and justify his prejudice and hatred of them. In a way, the Saroth are “known by the sin of [their] fathers…” and those sins are actually lies that were spread about them. They didn’t do anything wrong, but they’re still known as ones who have done wrong things. So from the Saroth’s perspective, they might say to one another, all of these lies about us are gonna be brought to light and the truth will be known about us, and we’ll finally be free! This lyric “hard evidence is power” reminds me of how in chapter 8, the truth that the Saroth didn’t spread the disease is brought to light. Hard evidence is brought up and that (with Gwynne’s help) makes the people realize that Galeric is lying. The lyrics, “Secrets tell a million lies / To build the walls they hide behind” describe what Galeric and the Resolute are doing to exclude the Saroth. Galeric & the Resolute are indeed building walls against the Saroth.
On a more broad note, however, this whole song can be understood in terms of the Dark Man lying to the people of Aeris and the Chosen Redeemers saying that truth will come to light so that all of the prisoners bound to the Dark Man may be free if they so choose to leave the Dark Man’s lies.
BE A WITNESS
As we consider the themes in the previous song (and so in the story), something is probably rising up in us that says we will no longer stand by and watch injustices happening. We will no longer stand by and watch lies being spread. We will no longer stand by and watch hatred and violence ravage our streets and lands. We must stand and not remain quiet any longer. And that is exactly what the Chosen Redeemers do; they take a stand for the sake of the peoples of Aeris and the land that it would be free of hatred, free of lies, free of the Dark Man’s slavery. The One and the Lady awaken them to stand up and be the leaders they are called to be. In the first book, we see Vic awaken to her Chosen Redeemer role. At first, she’s hesitant and timid, more of a witness to the evils plaguing Aeris than a participant in opposing these evils. In book two, however, Vic is beginning to understand she is meant to restore and heal to her land and lead the people to fight the real enemy–the Outcast. In book three, Vic has embraced her role as a Chosen Redeemer and she no longer can stand to “just be a witness.” Her natural response is to stand up to see the people of Aeris be free of the Outcast’s grip and be healed from their brokenness and battle wounds. This theme of standing up and not merely being a witness is woven throughout the series.
The lyric, “So if you wanna watch the war break out / If you wanna let your silence shout / You can, but I won’t just be a witness, I’ll stand” ties back in the theme of “the war raging over [Vic].” Vic chooses to stand with the One at her side.
This can be related to many of the other characters as well. But there are others who are too afraid and overcome by the Dark Man, so they do not stand, and because of this, they are easy prey for the Dark Man and become his captives without much of a fight. People like Dina would probably be just as powerful as Vic if only she took a stand, but instead she chose not to and became a slave to the Dark Man’s plans. It’s powerful for me to see the contrast between characters like Sara, Tellen, Katrina, Gwynne, Vic… and characters like Jordan, Dina, Emilio. Every person has a choice of whether to stand up against the Dark Man or to give in to apathy and do nothing about it (which inevitably leads to becoming a slave to the Dark Man). People like Dina essentially say that the Dark Man is far too powerful to overcome, so they might as well join him rather than fight him. But the truth is demonstrated by characters such as Vic or Sara who trust to the One regardless of how great and terrible the Dark Man seems. They resist the evil forces and always believe that there is hope for overcoming the Dark Man’s plans. They choose to take a stand rather than remain complacent toward these evils. And they succeed.
This is a powerful theme for me to take away: we can choose to take that stand and fight for the good things in this world. As Tellen, Vic, and Katrina all say–there is much that is still worth fighting for. So why not take a stand? Why only remain a witness when we could rise up to be the redeemers, the healers, the restorers that we were born to be?
The verse and chorus sung by multiple voices gives that sense of working together and being a collective and a community who will stand against the evils destroying the people and land. They stand for the change that will bring freedom. This collective can be all the people of Aeris, but also the Chosen Redeemers. The different lines can apply to many characters, but can also refer to specific Chosen Redeemers (hint: one of the lines uses the word “dream.”)
“We’re gonna take the streets
Marchin’ for a bigger dream
Shout til the blind can see
It’s time for us to be free
We’re gonna bring the rain
We’re gonna light the flame
Stand till we see the change
Human we’re all the same […]
But I can’t just be a witness”
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Conclusion:
Ya’ll are amazing! If you made it this far, thanks for coming along on the journey!
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Everybody knows that music can hit a whole lot of emotions. People have used it to enhance movies and television shows for ages. Recently, I’ve asked a friend whose taste in music ranges very far and wide to select songs for themes, characters, and situations in some of my book series. What follows is my commentary for a selection of the songs. I will share her thoughts later in the week. This kind of project is very collaborative. I focused a lot on the story tie-ins and my friend did that plus paid attention to the flow of music.
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Reclaim the Darkland Playlist
Select Character Themes:
Right Where You Want Me – Victoria Saveron (beginning)
“If I’m a target for the enemy, then I’m exactly where you want me.” It captures the idea that no world changing ever happens in complete peace. There’s conflict. There’s hardship. There’s war.
For This You Were Born – Victoria Saveron (end; she’s half Arkonai/ half Saroth)
The song kind of sums up the whole series. I don’t think the lyrics particularly contain spoilers but there are several parts that connect very well to Vic’s journey to understand who she is and what she’s always been destined to accomplish. “Silence the doubt in you mind. You were by design a victor”
Born to Bring the Light – Katrina Polani (Saroth)
Katrina’s always been very comfortable supporting Vic’s quest, but there’s also a time when she’s asked to step up even more. “I wasn’t looking for a fight, but the fight found me.” “I was born to bring the light. To chase the dark and face the night.”
On My Side – Sara Andari (Bereft)
Sara’s always had very, very strong faith. Even though she’s Bereft, meaning she has no connection to magic, she trusts the One completely. “You go before me. You stand behind. You tell my fear to run. Always and forever I am loved.” (Could also be for Vic, but more than half the songs have some connection to her.)
Devil’s Got No Hold – Shadow (Arkonai)
This is for his turning point. Most characters have one. There’s a particular point late in the book where Shadow needs to pick a side once and for all. “He can’t have the best of me. The devil’s got no hold on me”
My Favorites:
With 57 songs, it’s inevitable that any listener will be able to find a few favorites and a few they have trouble connecting to. I’m no exception. Here are a few of my personal favorites.
Who Are You and the Who Are You remix:
They’re both gorgeous pieces of music. I argued strongly to keep both in the list, but I’m pretty sure I didn’t have to twist my friend’s arm too hard. They ended up at different parts of the list because the differences in their tempos facilitated different moods. I feel like the lyrics fit the Dark Man (bad guy) questioning Vic. “You’re not such an easy target. One minute I know you then I don’t.”
Be A Witness: This song is pretty convicting. The whole of Redeemer Chronicles has some strong themes of racial tensions and unrest. “If you want to watch the war break out. If you want to let your silence shout. You can, but I won’t just be a witness.” This is the crux of the declaration the main characters are making at the beginning of the story.
Roots: This is beautiful and poignant song about breaking free. Different context than the video, but there’s a chapter in the book that lines up with the ideas pretty closely. “I’m tired of running, running running into the things that kill my soul.”
Chapter Alignments (Work in Progress):
This is a slightly outdated list, but it shows you some of my initial processing of the list of music. Question marks mean I wasn’t certain of the placement. There might be a few songs that were removed from the list, but I “think” I got them all.
Chapter 1: Rise of the Redeemers – We will All Be Changed; Be A Witness (Wow, powerful song)
Chapter 2: Hostage Negotiation – Watch Your Back
Chapter 3: Two Visitors – Right Where You Want Me
Chapter 4: Search for the Sage – Heart of Courage
Chapter 5: Resolute Rule – The Hate Inside; Free
Chapter 6: Kaltan City Fires – Hero
Chapter 7: Redeemer’s Gift – On my Side (Sara)
Chapter 8: Special Election – Let the Light Come In
Chapter 9: Prison Break – Free??; Fight On
Chapter 10: Unlikely Healers – Salt of the Earth
Chapter 11: Control Spells – Never Give up?
Chapter 12: Messengers – Find You
Chapter 13: Into the Darklands – Madness (entry); Wake Up World (Vic’s pov – as Vic steps into the Darklands) Running for Your Life (Dark Man’s pov); Closing In; Never give up?
Chapter 14: Special Guests – Game of Survival
Chapter 15: The Black Dragon’s Army – Turning Tides; Legends are Made; Sound Off the Sirens
Chapter 16: Renew and Restore – Conquer; Cover the Earth; Wake Me
Chapter 17: Four Corners – Ready Set Let’s Go; Devil’s Got No Hold
Chapter 18: Trail of Tears – Never Surrender; Heart of Courage;
Chapter 19: Perfect Prison – Song of the Beyond; Dreamer; Roots
Chapter 20: The Dead Find Rest – Recover; Breathe; Something can Grow; Let the Light Come In
Chapter 21: Fourth Form – Dragonland;
Chapter 22: Most Desperate Hour – I Know Your Secrets; Who Are You (Remix)
Chapter 23: Family Affair – Darkness (Dina’s theme)
Chapter 24: Soul Keeper – Born to Bring the Light (Katrina’s Theme)
Chapter 25: Campfire and Crossroads – Blood and Tears; Never Give Up; Into the White Light
Conclusion:
Whether you get to read the book or not, you should totally check out this fabulous list of music. Then go follow all those artists and support them on their journeys. Thanks for reading.
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Two siblings, Dante and Claire, go on a journey to find a place where they can be safe from an overbearing government, a place where people can grow real food without fear.
Additional Comments:
– The premise – that genetically altered, government sanctioned plants and processes have taken over America – is well-handled but still not very believable. The idea that all knowledge of gardening and farming is pretty much gone from the world except for some books and a few brave souls, is hard to accept, especially given the ending. I believe the part where the government wants to control everything, but I just don’t buy that these kids have 0 knowledge of things like apple trees and chickens. The internet would have to be completely gone. It’s been renamed the monitor, so it’s still there.
– Claire and Dante are believable.
– Dialogue’s good.
– Plot’s okay. It’s a little slow for my tastes, but that could be because of the recent stuff I’ve been listening to.
– I don’t get much of a sense of danger or fear for the young travelers. It unfolds like that “Everything is Awesome” song from the Lego movie. By extension, that means it will be exactly what some people are looking for, but just wasn’t “my thing.”
Conclusion:
An intriguing look at a future where processing food has reached uncharted heights.
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Chant Baker finds and old time machine in the basement of his parents’ shop. He uses it to visit a few key spots in history and solve a small mystery.
Additional Comments:
– It’s middle grade appropriate.
– I’m not big on time travel books in general because logic always messes with my head. They tried to address the issue of clothes a few times, but it just seemed like everywhere Chant went initially, people were very friendly and totally accepting of the fact that he appeared out of nowhere. I can see his clothes blending in well enough in the 1960’s but 1860’s?
– His family’s perfect, but that’s cool. The fact that a perfect nuclear family strikes me as abnormal is probably just a sad commentary on the state of the modern world.
– The places Chant chooses to visit do follow a certain logic, which I appreciate. (Mostly, they’re places he wants to study for history or English class.) I enjoyed the fact that he didn’t get a perfect grade even though he’d traveled back in time and witnessed the event in person because history isn’t always remembered perfectly.
– There wasn’t a real sense of danger, but that might come from the general middle grade feel than something in the plot. Probably don’t want a story like this to come across as too scary anyway.
– I hear the audio version, which was very good.
– Fun, unique premise that’s well-executed (in audio format anyway)
Conclusion:
If middle grade time travel’s something you enjoy, Chant won’t disappoint you.
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